Wednesday, August 20, 2014

What I Did On My Summer Vacation…



 housekeeper

As most of you know I have a day job, I have that eating habit I need to support. So as per employment agreement, every so often (once a year) I get a vacation. Well I just finished my two weeks off and I’m sure you all are interested in hearing what I did. If not pretend, because I’m telling anyway.
I cleaned my house.
I know what you’re thinking, what kind of vacation is that?
The necessary kind.
You see this wasn’t just the normal maintenance type of cleaning. This is the pull out the furniture (even the big stuff) and break up the party that the spiders and dust bunnies have been throwing. Don’t feel too bad for them, they’ll be back. They are dedicated party animals.
Why did it take me two weeks to clean my house? Well, you’ve got to remember I have to do this all by myself, and I'm discovering that housework is hard work. 
I just know my mother is in heaven laughing at me right now. 
So to do it right and not exhaust myself I limited myself to a room (sometimes half a room depending on big the furniture was ) every a couple of days. Notonly did I clean them, but I also rearranged the rooms as well. For instance, I now have an office. Seeing that I am now a business owner as a writer I figured I needed a room dedicated to writing.
Not that I had any time to write during my vacation as I was too busy cleaning.
I also managed clean out and organize the two remaining bedrooms, or as I prefer to think of them, my winter and summer residences. The smaller bedroom is closer to furnace, one of the few rooms I can keep warm in winter. Yes, we have weather in California every so often.
Now, the toughest job I came up against was cleaning out was my Mom’s medicine cabinet. Not because it was messy but because it was so personal to her. Also when someone you’ve lived with a long time dies it’s like you keep expecting them to come back and be mad because you got rid of their stuff. Still, most everything had expired so it was time.
I know, I know, she died three years ago and I still haven’t cleared out all of her stuff. I’m working on it.
Well I’m now back to the day job now and yes I had a good vacation. I didn’t have to get up early, I got my house clean and I have regained by sense of humor for my job. A necessary thing. Best of all, I have a real sense of accomplishment.
What was that? What about the closets?
Don’t ask about the closets.
That’s another vacation.

Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Red Herrings ~ Something Fishy in Cozy Mysteries

I am here to distract you!
A cozy mystery isn’t complete without the use of “red herrings.” A red herring is a false clue the author uses to send readers and the fictional sleuth in directions that don’t lead to the real villain. It is simply a tool to distract from the real culprit.

In the literal sense, no fish called a red herring exists; rather, the term refers to a fish that’s been strongly cured in brine or heavily smoked. The process makes the fish smell and turns the flesh a reddish color.

There is some debate about the etymology of the term red herring. The most common theory is that the strong smelling fish were used to train hunting dogs. The red herring would be dragged along a trail until a puppy learned to follow the scent. Later on, the trainer would drag a red herring perpendicular to the trail of the animal being hunted, and the dog would eventually learn to follow the trail of the animal. Another theory points to escaping convicts who used red herring to throw off hounds in pursuit.

No matter how the term came about, a cozy mystery wouldn’t be complete without red herrings to compel the book’s sleuth to go in directions that don’t point to the real villain. The cozy author can do this in several ways. The red herring used most often is giving other characters a motivation to kill the victim. Another technique used is to lead the sleuth astray with gossip or by planting false evidence at the scene of the crime. Sometimes the wrong victim is killed by accident—another red herring.

Cozy authors owe it to our readers to provide enough red herrings to make a story interesting. We also need to make sure all the red herrings are explained at the end of a book; for instance, if the sleuth uncovers a potential murder weapon at a possible suspect’s house, but that suspect turns out to the innocent, we need to know why the weapon was there. 

One notable example of the use of a red herring is the convict Seldon in “The Hound of the Baskervilles” by Sir Author Conan Doyle. The reader believes that Seldon must be involved in the murders, but he was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

I'd love to hear from our readers. What is your favorite red herring from a cozy you've recently read?



Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Summer Book Reading Giveaway

Hello dear readers. I don't see how I can follow up after Linda's great post on writing cozy mysteries. My life has been a roller coaster ride the last couple of months so please bear with my short post. I haven't even been able to focus to write any. I hope to get back on it soon. I've started a new series - the Skye Southerland Cozy Mystery Series. I sent the first book to an acquisitions editor I know and after waiting for a couple of months (seemed like forever) I got a reply. I need to do more editing and then she wants me to resubmit. I figure that is better than a flat-out no.

She mostly wanted me to work on Deep POV. What is deep pov you ask? Me too:) I've heard the term now for several years, but haven't gotten a good gripe on it yet. I'm going to research everything I can get my hands on and try to learn how to do this technique. This is what I found as an explanation of what deep pov is.


What is Deep POV?


* Deep POV is being so far into the head and emotions of your character that you write in her voice instead of your own. 
This goes beyond adding the occasional direct, italicized thought to the point where the narrative itself takes on the personality of the POV character. It puts the reader in the character's head instead of relying solely on action and dialog to determine the character's motives and opinions.
I'll keep you up-to-date on my progress and maybe even give some examples when I master this. In the meantime I'll have another book (book four) coming out in the fall in my Trixie Montgomery Cozy Mystery Series. The title is "Chilled in Chattanooga." I'm excited and anxious to hold it in my hands.
I'd like to offer a box-of-books giveaway for summer reading - even though summer is almost over:) Just leave a comment below (and your email address so we can notify you) and tell me something you've done fun this summer.  Maybe by the next time I post I'll have more about deep pov I can share. Have a wonderful rest of the summer!


Deborah Malone’s first novel Death in Dahlonega, finaled in the American Christian Fiction Writer’s Category Five writing contest! Deborah was also nominated for 2011 and 2012 Georgia Author of the year in Novel category. She has worked as a freelance writer and photographer, for the historic magazine “Georgia Backroads” since 2001.  She has had many articles and photographs published, and her writing is featured in “Tales of the Rails,” edited by Olin Jackson, as well as the “Christian Communicator.” She is a member of the Georgia Writer’s Association, Christian Author’s Guild, Advanced Writers and Speaker’s Association and the American Christian Fiction Writers.

Wednesday, July 30, 2014

So...You Want To Write A Cozy Mystery? by Linda Kozar

First, I hope you have a good imagination. For instance, I'm a people watcher. Sometimes my eyes wander to an old man in Sam's Club and I think, that one's got a touch of larceny in him. Or I'll peruse an art gallery and come across a painting that rouses my suspicions. Like this one, below:


I could swear one, or all these girls have murdererous intentions. (Pssst--the baby did it!)

So if you have a good imagination, can write a decent sentence and string your thoughts together, you might have a chance! Here is a list of the basic elements of the beloved cozy mystery genre.

Ten Elements of Writing a Cozy Mystery


  1. No gore or violence. The reader knows a crime has occurred but is not exposed to the seamier detective novel type of crime scene. The focus is on solving the crime.
  2. The sleuth and sidekick are usually female. Though an amateur, the sleuth is smart and inquisitive and she almost always has an interesting job or hobby.
  3. If a romance is included, have the two meet in the most romantic cozy mystery kind of way--over the dead body. Then have them suffer a couple of setbacks and wind up together at the conclusion.
  4. Open the first chapter with the crime, of course!
  5. Create two or three strong suspects and eliminate them one-by-one until the last one is the killer, or reveal a totally unexpected character as the killer (even better).
  6. The sleuth has to be in peril at some point in the story, usually via confrontation with the suspect who intends to do bodily harm, but the sleuth is rescued or saved at the last minute.
  7. The reader must be introduced to a lifestyle or craft, etc. that sparks an interest.
  8. Fascinating information (via that lifestyle or craft, etc.) is shared and conveyed in the text of the story/dialogue.
  9. Recipes and cats are common in cozy mysteries.
  10. The mystery must have a satisfying conclusion, a sense of justice reached, and all loose ends tied up.
Now you're ready to write your first cozy mystery. All you need is an idea and the fortitude to sit hunched over your laptop for a couple of months. Ready, set, type!

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Tuesday, July 22, 2014

Vacation Bible School of Hard Knocks

picture from: greeksandromansnewtestament
This year, for kicks, my bff said, "Hey, let's do a Lego VBS!" followed by, "And let's write the whole curriculum ourselves!" followed by "Using the book of Nehemiah!"

I admit, the last time (Possibly the only time?) I had read Nehemiah was as a student at a Torchbearers Bible School in Sweden, when we were tasked with reading the whole Bible in nine months. Reading the whole Bible in one swoop, and having to summarize each book, was the best school/church thing I've ever done in my life.  But...no matter how good it was, it was still seventeen years ago.

I've been involved in a lot of VBS's. Sure, I missed the year I was in Sweden (though we did more than few camps that summer) and the one before, when I was overseas with Royal Servants. And I missed a few as a newly wed when I couldn't get work off. And the year that Norah was less than a week old during VBS. The year Lucy was three months old? I was all over that VBS.

So I am pretty sure I can count on one hand the VBS's I've missed since I was old enough to attend the first time as a kid.

But did that mean I was ready to adapt a book full of census lists and map descriptions into an action story with cliffhangers and a clear gospel message? (My best friend doesn't ask much, does she?) Suuuuure I was! After all, I write cozy mysteries...can't be that different right?

Well, different or not, God totally led the direction of the story, and it is awesome (not because of anything I did. Nehemiah, as it turns out, is just an awesome book!) I know things about Nehemiah right now I would have never known otherwise. (For example, did you know that most likely the king he was cup bearer to was the same king whose queen was Esther? And that when Nehemiah requested permission to go and rebuild the wall, the "Queen" was seated beside her king? For such a time as this indeed, Queen Esther!)


But more nerve wracking than making it into an action story, was trying to build a gospel message out of an old testament book dedicated to rebuilding a wall.

Or at least it was scary before I read the book again. See, in the book of Nehemiah, they celebrate the completion of the wall by standing around for several days listening to Ezra read Bible Stories. (Well, close enough.) And in addition to learning that they were totally missing out on ancient Israelite Family Camp (Feast of Booths) they also realized they were missing out on God, because they were sinners. And all of the Israelites confess their sins and make a new covenant with God. Right there. About four fifths of the way through the action...exactly where I needed it for a five day Vacation Bible School.

See, for three days we show the kids we love them and earn their trust by listening to them, and caring about them. For those same three days we teach them what a Bible is, how it works and who it is about (It's the book all about how much the great and awesome God loves you!) And then...on day four, we give them all the essential deets about how to have a relationship with this God.

Should we tell them the gospel every single day, you know, just in case?

In a way, we do give them the gospel every day. We tell them that God loves them and wants a relationship with them, and has provided a way for that. And we tell them a few more details about that each day. But we don't want parrots who repeat "Jesus loves me." We want children who have a foundation of who God is and why it matters that he loves them hearing the gospel.

Well, anyway, that's the way it seems most VBS curriculums are set up, and I like it that way. I like to prepare the soil for the seed. I like to build a foundation for their new faith.

And even though I *know* that everything in the Bible points to Jesus, until I had the big job of turning Nehemiah into a fun Lego themed VBS, I really didn't know if I could do it. I mean, sure, you could make comparisons and analogies for an adult audience, but could the story of a slave in Babylon who wanted to build a  wall really give me a way to teach the kids the gospel?

Yes, yes, and YES! And obviously, I am massively excited about that.

So, if you are waiting for Plain Jane's next adventure, or Mitzy's next mystery, or the further tales of Prof. Isaac Daniels, this is at least part of why you are still waiting. I think...it's not a bad reason!


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When not writing I knit socks, and accompany my mandolin loving husband on the spoons.
I’m also the author of The Mitzy Neuhaus Mystery Series, and The Plain Jane Mystery Series. I was the Mystery/Suspense Category winner for the 2012 Christian Writers of the West Phoenix Rattler Contest, a finalist for Speculative Fiction in the same contest, and have a Drammy from the Portland Civic Theatre Guild. I currently serve as the Vice President of the Portland chapter of the American Christian Fiction Writers Association.

I have a degree in History from Portland State University and still live in the rainiest part of the Pacific Northwest with my goofy family and two small dogs.
Novels by Traci Tyne Hilton
The Mitzy Neuhaus Mysteries
Foreclosed
Eminent Domain
Buyer’s Remorse
Frozen Assets
The Plain Jane Mysteries
Good, Clean Murder
Dirty Little Murder
Bright New Murder
Health, Wealth, and Murder
Other Titles
Hearts to God
Gone: The Tangle Saga


Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Trials in the Mystery of Life

What do you do when trials arise? Do you say, "Oh, good - a trial! Can't wait to see the outcome." Or perhaps you crawl into your shell and wait, hoping it will end soon. As believers, we don't face trials alone; our faith in God gives us what we need to press on. We may feel overwhelmed, scared, or confused when faced with adversity, but have you noticed? Trials pass. Peace comes. We move forward.
Amazon * Barnes & Noble * Kobo * iTunes

"The Long Trip Home" is the story of how Jillian Bradley handles a terrible trial in her life. As  I wrote the book, it was important to include emotions of how she felt. Since I had not experienced a trial like hers, I had to glean from the experiences of others. Such is one of the challenges of being a writer. I write stories to not only entertain, but to depict how our loving Heavenly Father is always there for us. 

I hope you enjoy this latest adventure of Jillian and her Yorkie companion, Teddy. Here are the Reviews.


Cheers!
~Nancy Jill



Wednesday, July 2, 2014

THE WOOLLY WEEGIE HAS ARRIVED!!


At last IT has decided to make a grand appearance. The Family Legacy story. The one my Daddy used to tell. The Woolly Weegie. Here's the description:

"You know the trouble with Monsters? They're never what you think.
Reporter Irene Waters and her cameraman Troy Stenson are about to learn that lesson the hard way as they find themselves on the hunt for a local legend called The Woolly Weegie. Or at least that is what everyone in the community of Hammond Village has been led to believe. In truth, Bernie Youngstown has sent his team on an actual investigative story to uncover an alleged academic cheating ring at a local private high school.
But just as they believe they have escaped the weirdness that usually accompanies their stories, weirdness comes looking for them when The Woolly Weegie comes pounding on their door.
So Irene’s Eerie Adventures not only will have to deal with a “monster” who refuses to be ignored, but the diabolical Secretary of The Records Department who is making her final move."

Do that intrigue you? I hope so. Coming up with descriptions for books is hard. If you have suggestions let me know. Feedback, I am finding, is a very good thing in writing.

 So, if you have never read my books a few things you should keep in mind:
There will be no recipes, no crafting, no party tips, no tea, no crime solving dogs nor cats, cute businesses and no murders.
Not that there is anything wrong with those things in a cozy mystery book. I've read and enjoyed many of them. I just don't write them. My plots are...different.
Yeah, God's sense of humor really was in full force the day He made me.
Since I don't do recipes, crafting, etc., etc. as an added bonus this book includes the FULL Woolly Weegie story as told by my Dad, B.W. Ragsdale. Initials are big in my family.
So The Woolly Weegie is here! Run! To Amazon, Barnes and Noble and Smashwords.

The Reboot Files and The Lady Midnight Series